To me, it’s just not acceptable to put up a product for sale in this state. The writing is redundant in several parts and a lot of what made it in should’ve been left on the cutting room floor. There are multiple grammar and spelling mistakes, inaccurate word choices, and other conventions of Wattpad fan fiction such as using multiple exclamation points. It’s incredibly clear right off the bat that this didn’t go through an editor. (Or anything, really.) I also loved that the heroine and her friends were women of color, as it’s a sorely under-represented demographic in romance. The Red Scot has been on my list for a while now because the synopsis grabbed me and because it’s a rare delight to see positive representation for plus-sized folks in romance. I’m not one for traditional romances, but I’ve been reading some heavy stuff lately and needed a palate cleanser. It pains me to write this because I hate giving such a low rating to a story written with good intentions, but I feel it’s necessary in situations like this. Even though this one didn't do it for me, her skill in bringing a diverse cast of characters to life surpasses any reservations I have regarding tropes or plot.

I'll keep reading this series because I love this author. >Too many illogical decisions or deus ex machina plot points especially regarding the stalker conflict made it impossible for me to suspend my disbelief overall. Everyone's tastes and experiences are different, but this is one of my very least favorite tropes. >Whenever virginity is a key plot-point it's a huge turn-off to me, especially when losing it is even a little painful. Yes, Braedyn is patient and perfect and irresistible, but not enough for their sexy times to ever be truly sexy to me. >I couldn't get past just how desperately Payton needed therapy (instead of sex) to help her overcome her trauma. >strong group of female friends for the main character >diverse representation of characters - race, size, personality, taste, all of it! one of the biggest reasons I adore this author

>super shy Scottish MMA fighter hero - hella swoony and a pleasant surprise subversion of the alpha protector trope

The Red Scot by Twyla Turner